I'm looking for strong criticism. Thanks Attachment 14946 Attachment 14947 Attachment 14948 i don't know if i should continue this one.
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I'm looking for strong criticism. Thanks Attachment 14946 Attachment 14947 Attachment 14948 i don't know if i should continue this one.
Love them, maybe the guns could be a bit thinner? Also The melee looks amazing but looks very similar to rage blade.
Looks awesome :). But I think the first gun should probably be a bit more shaped and shaded
I can't see the gif, it says gif but no one shows xD
First gun looks to plain!
Ok, first of all good job.
The first gun:
- too square around the edges
- hardly any visible shading
- jaggies on the hilt
The melee:
- try removing that yellow part, i have no idea what it is however i think it would look better without it.
- in the middle of the add texture similar to the ends
- add some lighter pixels on the ends to highlight the pointy parts of the ice
The other gun:
- far too straight and square
- shading needs alot of work
- random white straps at the front..? not sure what they are
- 2 hilts??
Overall not bad though, i can see you gradually improving keep it up!
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On era-go if a gif is over the required kb (19.5kb) it will not show.
You are probably right. I think he may have accidently saved it as a .gif on accident or is planning on turning it into one. :)
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